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Tuesday 16 October 2018

In the Holidays

I was playing Fortnite and my brother came in the room and asked me if I wanted to go play basketball, I said "Yes." We drove to the courts and I took my first shot and it swished in. My brother said "Let's have a shooting competition." He went first and got 8/10. It was my turn, I got... 6/10. I lost but I keeped on practicing. I was improving, I got way better at shooting after this. I was getting 7/10 a lot but then I started getting 9/10 and 8/10. It was very hard because they were three pointers, three points are very far from the hoop. My brother was helping me get better because he is good at basketball. We were there for 2 hours, we had our last shootout before we go to Burger King and have some food. We got really hungry because we were there for 2 hours. My brother got 9/10, I got 9/10 so we tied at the last one. We had to go because we were hungry. We went to Burger King and I got a chicken burger combo and my brother got the same. So we went back home and I played Fortnite and Rainbow Six Siege with my friends Austin and Murtaza. I watched Netflix aswell. Overall it was a fun day and I hope to get better at basketball.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sam,

    This was an interesting recount about what you did over the holidays. It sounds like you and your brother had a lot of fun playing basketball at the courts. You have really good use of the punctuation we have been working on, and have your commas in the correct spots, well done!

    Keep up this level of Commitment to all of your tasks.

    I look forward to seeing more of your writing on your blog this term!
    - Miss Birtch

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